blue sky
big pyramids
sand
people
rocks
town
road
I see a blue sky.
People a next to the huge pyramids. The pyramid was as big as a tower.
This huge pyramids made of rock and sand.
It looks hot with blue sky and shimmering light. The sky was as blue as the ocean.
It looks hot with nothing growing on the ground. The sand was lava.
Slowly, people walked across the big pyramids made of rocks and sand.
As slow as a 1908987kg turtle.
Quickly, the cars raced along the road in the sand. The cars were a KTX airplane.
The big town looked small next to the three pyramids.
Slowly, people walked across the big pyramids made of rocks and sand.
Quickly, the cars raced along the road in the sand.
The big town looked small next to the three pyramids.
I think that it's a nice piece of writing and I liked how you coloured the writing when you did a simile or a metaphor :p :)
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